Wednesday 7 December 2011

Rossetti BBC Radio 4 Response

|I have listened to the programme and was delighted to discover it was almost 45 minutes long. Briefly I will say what I found interesting.
I found the bit about the 'Pre-Raphealite Brotherhood' interesting as I had never heard of them before, and therefore was unaware that they influenced her poetry in such a significant way. Making her poetry more bright, vibrant, jewel like and very carefully observed. Which I think you can definitely see in her works, such as Goblin Market.

I was interested in the way they described her breakdown and ill health affecting her and making her have a more melancholic outlook on life.

I thought they analysed Goblin Market very well. I was intrigued by their comparison of the Eucharist and the section in the poem in which Laura sucks the fruit juices from her sister. They likened it to something like taking the blood of Christ into you, which of course offers a completely different interpretation to the ideas that we came up with about Rossetti maybe having some form of repressed sexuality.  So I found this very enlightening in a way as I would never have seen this in a religous light, and I think it shows just how much Rossetti was influenced by her religion. 
I was also interested in the idea they presented that the sisters in Goblin Market are representative of Rossetti and her sister. I think it quite odd that Rossetti saw herself as the less faithful one and would even suggest in the poem that she would give in to temptation (or at least insinuate this, if the characters are supposed to display an element of her and her sister).

Finally I thought they interpreted Rossetti's views on feminism well. I had always assumed when reading her poetry that she had a strong sense of feminism, so I was surprised to hear that she was against votes for women etc.
I hadn't really realised that Rossetti always seems to identify the ideal Christlike condition  with women as apposed to men, for example showing women as redemptive figures and men as inadequate. I think this is important as it shows that although she had total faith in the patriarchal nature of the Church and society etc, she still considered it important to use her faith to portay women in a very positive and enpowering way.

Saturday 26 November 2011

Marie Antoinette-sick gal =P

Like ages ago, you no when deyer waz no Facebook or MaccyDees, deyer was this bang tidy galdem called Marie Antoinette. She hailed from Austria (H.R.E MASSIVEEEEE! BRAP) and she got married at 14 or sumting. SLAG. I think dats well 2 young. she got with dis French geezer called Louis the 5 millioneth or suming. he was shy as and kinda chubby. GUTTED. even tho she waz well fit no one wnted to be her m8, coz dey was well jell. she waz tots minted n had nice threads. but it was well bad coz she neva got any, ppl blamed her wen atch it was old Lozza what couldn't get it up. what a nob hed.
she got wiv the french dude to like make their countrees fwends (Foreign fwends!! inbetweeners). but peeps were so suspish of her coz dey wazzzz weeeell racist, i wunder where dat martin luther king guy waz at he cud hav sorted it out, he probs had hiz fone turned off or summot.
l8ter on, she had kidz (lozza probs took sum ting). what a G.

the world was well crap wen she lived. evryting waz about power and basics in frogland some shit went down wiv sum revolution or summat. Marie babes waz kinda buggered coz no one lyked herrrrr. so her n the fam chipped to paris. dey tried to escape l8ter on but dey got caught. LOL FAIL.
b4 all dat went down, some fool sed she did some jesusdude 4 some bling. (as if she didnt jus nick it). me tinks dis dude waz just beggin it. peeps were also well womanist and gals had 2 do what men sed.
basics wen she waz chillin around, that big place Europe waz changing. some skint guys got peeved coz they were lyk starving or summot and dey went on dis INsane killin spree, im tlking serious COD kill streak.

in de end dey used some gill ting to kill Marie, basic she got shanked in de neck n her hed fell off. SAD TIMES.

dats bout it. big respect 2 da sick gal M.A.
S7 MASSEEEEVVVEE.
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I think this is genuinely the best piece of writing I've ever done. I can't believe I managed to do lower case 'i's' for the whole thing. I don't know if you managed to get any actual infomation from that, but it was fun to write.

Monday 21 November 2011

How Does Austen Create Her Characters In Chapter 11?

Austen creates her characters using many different methods in chapter 11. She focuses on the characterisation of Miss Bingley, Elizabeth and Mr Darcy.

One effective way in which we learn about the characters is through the narrator and the opinion they present us with. These opinions are often combined with the opinions of other characters, such as Elizabeth. For example at the beginning of the chapter we are told by the narrator what Elizabeth thinks of Bingley's sisters, so this influences our opinion of them. We are told that "their powers of conversation were considerable. They could describe an entertainment with accuracy and relate an anecdote with humour, and laugh at their aqquaintance with sprit" and that "Miss Bingley's eyes were instantly turned towards Darcy". This tells us that as soon as Darcy is around, Miss Bingley has eyes for no-one else, her motives are therefore clear; to entertain and more importantly attract Darcy.  So we know from the start of the chapter that Caroline Bingley's main focus is Darcy. We even see that she has planned her actions in advance, in order to secure him as "she had obtained private intelligence" that Darcy doesn't like cards, she is making sure she knows what will please him beforehand. So the narrator is important in creating characters.

The character of Miss Bingley is created further throughout the chapter, and the way Austen writes it, she seems to be making a mockery of Miss Bingley in order to describe her determination to secure Darcy. For example we are told how Miss Bingley mimics Darcy's behaviour to try and draw his attention, "Darcy took up a book;Miss Bingley did the same". Austen seems to mock her as she keeps asking Darcy what his book is about, yet the book she is supposedly reading is the second volume of his. So it displays her desperation to attract Darcy and portrays her actions to be quite silly. Another example of this is contrast and therefore hypocrisy shown between her speech and her actions. For example we are told she was "quite exhausted" by her book and she then searches the room "in quest of some amusement", however directly after this she says "there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book!"-What she does contrasts with what she says, which agains illustrates that everything she says is simply aimed at Darcy and impressing him by pretending to share his interests. So this has been done purposely by Austen to shows Miss Bingley's relentlessness in pursuing Darcy.

Contrasts between characters are used in chapter 11 to create/display their nature. For example at the beginning of the chapter a comparison is made between Mr Hurst, Darcy and Bingley. Darcy and Mr Hurst are a lot more formal in their adressing of the women, for example "polite congratulations" are given and Mr Hurst even gives a "slight bow". Whereas Bingley is described as being "full of joy and attention"-his greeting is a lot less formal and seems more genuine. So this highlights the difference between the men.
There is also a contrast shown between Elizabeth and Miss Bingley. We see how they are totally different in their attitude towards things. For example Elizabeth is willing to tease Darcy whereas Miss B "was incapable of disappointing him".

Through the conversation that Darcy and Elizabeth have we see how they are comfortable and flirtatious with each other. We see how just like Miss B can't keep her attention off Darcy, he can't help but look at Elizabeth. For example this has already been shown when Elizabeth joins Miss Bingley for "a turn around the room". He completely ignores Miss B and remains "inflexibly studious". Whereas when Elizabeth stands he immediately look up and "unconsciously closed his book". So we see his feelings for Elizabeth starting to show. Following this he and Elizabeth have a playful conversation in which Elizabeth tricks Darcy about vanity and pride. They mimic each other's language and talk with ease "And your defect" "And yours repeated with a smile". There is also no attribution of speech and this shows the intimacy and flirtation of their conversation. This shows their natural chemistry. This is obviously observed by Miss B who we are told is "tired of a conversation in which she had no share". This provides Darcy time to check himself and "He began to feel the danger of paying Elizabeth too much attention"-This reiterates that he is aware of the risks and of Elizabeths social status in comparision with his.

Overall character is created very skillfully by Austen throughout chapter 11, some particuarly strong/effective methods in my opinion are the way speech is used and the way she mocks Miss Bingley and her actions.

(I planned for 10 mins and then wrote it up on paper for about 35 mins. I wrote 2 sides using my notes and what we worked on in the lesson)

Thursday 17 November 2011

Character in 'Maude Clare' by Christina Rossetti

Rossetti uses many techniques to tell us about the characters in 'Maude Clare', however I will be concentrating on some in more depth.

One thing that is used with great effect to present the character is speech. The dialogue between the characters can tells us a lot about them, for example the fact that the "son Thomas" only says one thing in the poem and he stutters etc shows us that he is weak in comparision with Maude Clare and Nell. For example he says "Lady" "- Maude Clare" and he then hides his face. This shows us he may have a guilty conscience and is ashamed of what he did. This could be interpreted to mean that he led Maude Clare on, or that he feels he has married the wrong woman. Maude Clare has the most speech in the poem, this shows us how powerful she is and how she is hijacking the attention from Nell even though it's her wedding day. This could influence our opinion of her and make us think of her as spiteful as she is purposely ruining someone's wedding day. To make it worse she is effectively telling everyone about an affair she had with Thomas. For example "That day we..." and "My half of golden chain" both suggest some former intimate relationship between the Maude Clare and Thomas, so this tells us about the relationships between some of the characters.
Through speech we also see that Maude Clare wants nothing more to do with Thomas, she says to Nell "I wash my hands thereof". This shows that Maude Clare has the upper hand in all ways. She is rejecting Thomas even though it looks like he initially rejected her, so she is taking the power back. This also shows her appeal to Nell to also defy Thomas and leave him and his "fickle heart" despite having just married him. The final character we learn of through dialogue is Nell. We see that although Maude Clare is dominating the attention, she is still a strong woman. She doesn't seem embarassed by the things that have been said she just moves on. She says she will stay with Thomas whatever, "For he's my lord for better or worse". This shows that she is willing to uphold him and that she is an amiable and resilient character. Finally the speech illustrates that Maude |Clare is still at the centre of everything, even when it looks like Nell has prevailed. For example although Nell has the last word, these last words are "Maude Clare" so it shows even Nell can't help but mention her name. So Rossetti reiterates that she is the main focus by leaving her name in our thoughts at the end.

Descriptions of the characters are also useful in learning about them in the poem. For example the comparison between Maude Clare and Nell shows us how there is a difference in status between them. Maude Clare is described as a "queen" and Nell a "village maid". She is obviously not as beautiful or as composed. This again illustrates Maude Clare's power as it shouldn't be this way, it's Nell's wedding day so she should be the centre of attention. The mere fact the title is 'Maude Clare' also tells is she is the focus.
The description of Thomas and Nell tells us how they feel about each other, for example Rossetti compares them. Thomas was "pale with inward strife And Nell was pale with pride". So basically Thomas isn't happy with marriage, perhaps as he has feelings for Maude Clare, whereas Nell is happy and pleased.

Finally it is obvious that the women characters hold the power in the poem. As I mentioned before we only hear a man speak once in the poem and he falters and looks weak. So the men are not seen to be important or to have any significant power. So Rossetti has switched the stereotype round so that the power is in the women's hands (perhaps because on a wedding day women are normally in control). It is also Nell and Maude Clare that are in conflict/discussion over everything, Thomas doesn't have any imput.

Monday 31 October 2011

My View Of Elizabeth So Far...

From the start of the book my view of Elizabeth has been that she is very intelligent and all together more interesting than her sisters or any other female characters. For example in chapter one, Mr Bennet expresses that she is his favourite child, referring to her as "My little Lizzy". He then goes on to justify this by saying she has "something more of a quickness than her sisters". So before we are even introduced fully to Lizzy we have an idea that she is different to the others. I think that Elizabeth seems to share more of her father's character than her mother's. She is not silly and excited like Lydia and Kitty and it does not seem to be her main aim in life to secure a husband. So in this sense she seems unfeminine in her views, compared to other women in the book.
It also seems to me that Elizabeth isn't in anyway vain and doesn't care what people think of her. For example, this is shown in chapter three when Mr Darcy insults her and she doesn't seem upset at all. On the contrary, she tells the story "with great sprit amongst her friends". She doesn't worry about what Darcy has said and seems able to laugh about it, this is displayed through the narrator's description of her; "She had a lively, playful disposition, which delighted in anything ridiculous".
Another example of Elizabeth's good humour is in chapter six when she is teasingly sarcastic with Mr Darcy. She says "Mr Darcy is all politeness"-she is evidentily referring to Darcy "slighting" her, and Darcy will know this. There are times in the book so far when we can tell that Elizabeth's behaviour is not the norm to some people. For example she appears unladylike when, in chapter seven, she walks through muddy fields to visit Jane at Netherfield. "her appearance created a great deal of surprise. That she should have walked three miles so early in the day, in such dirty weather and by herself was almost incredible to Mrs Hurst and Miss Bingley". Elizabeth doesn't pretend to be something she's not, she acts as she sees fit.

Another view of Elizabeth that I have so far is that she is a free sprit and can be teasingly defiant and confrontational. For example in chapter six when we are told "Miss Lucas defied her friend to mention such a subject to him (Darcy), which immediately provoking Elizabeth to do it". She seems to say what she wants, despite being advised by her friend to keep quiet.

Elizabeth also appears to be a very caring person. She is very close to her sister, Jane and is very loving towards her. For example in chapter four she says to Jane "He (Bingley) could not help seeing that you were about five times as pretty as every other woman in the room". She also seems protective of Jane, and makes her aware of the impression she has of Bingley's sisters. This is another thing I have found about Elizabeth's character so far, she seems very observant and notices things in people that most wouldn't or don't in the book. An example of this would be the fact that she sees through Bingley's two sisters as Jane does not. She calls them "proud and conceited" whereas Jane insists they are "very pleasing women". She makes another observation of the sisters in chapter six, "Elizabeth still saw superciliousness in their treatment of everybody".

I think that Elizabeth's attitude to marriage in chapter six shows that she has sense and perhaps a more contempory attitude towards marriage. She feels that marriage should be for genuine love and affection and that you should "understand his character". She also feels marriage shouldn't be rushed, for example she reminds Miss Lucas that Jane has "only known Bingley a fortnight" and so should not be too hasty.

Finally I believe that Elizabeth is very popular amongst her peers due to her easy-manners and down to earth attitude. For example in chapter six we see this when she plays the piano, "Elizabeth, easy and unaffected, had been listened to with much more pleasure, though not playing half so well"-due to her passion and liveliness, people just enjoy her company more than others.

Overall my view of Elizabeth so far is that she is sensible, intelligent, genuine and playfully teasing, especially in comparison to other women. She is observant of other people and doesn't seem to get as caught up in marriage and society as her sisters and mother do.
She appears to have it all, wit, looks, intelligence and popularity amongst most people (apart from Mrs Hurst and Miss Bingley perhaps), and even Darcy cannot resist being charmed by her light and carefree personality.

Tuesday 18 October 2011

Jane Austen

Jane Austen lived from 1775 to 1817.
She was one of eight children of a clergyman, and she grew up in a close-knit family. Her father mostly educated her at home. Although not incredibly rich, her family were of middle class wealth and so were a part of the social environment often described in her novels. For example her status will have been similar to that of the Bennets in 'Pride and Prejudice'.

Her books are set among the English middle and upper classes, and they are well-known for their wit, social observation and insight into lives of early 19th Century women. For example along with being comical, her novels offer a real message about how dependant women at the time were on marriage for social and economic security. Her books are set in more rural environments, and Austen could have been writing from experience as she lived in the country. She is known to have enjoyed dancing for social purposes, attending formal dances at the local assembly hall, similar to those mentioned so frequently in 'Pride and Prejudice'. So we can assume that the important implications these dances had on a womens chance of marrying well, were observed by Austen and therefore useful when writing 'Pride and Prejudice'.

Austen's brother Henry helped her to negotiate with a publisher in 1811, which resulted in her first novel 'Sense and Sensibility' being released. Her other novels included 'Pride and Prejudice'(which she is thought to have referred to as her "darling child"), 'Mansfield Park', 'Emma' and two novels released after she died, 'Northanger Abbey' and 'Persuasion'. She published all of her novels anonymously and although they sold well at the time of their release, none of them were bestsellers.

Austen was never married and this could have been because she had strong attitudes towards marriage, as reflected in her writing. Perhaps being one of eight children she was all too familiar with the pressure to marry well, which is displayed through Mrs Bennet's attitude in 'Pride and Prejudice'.


Wednesday 12 October 2011

Pride and Prejudice Timeline

In our last lesson we were asked to make a timeline of the key events in Pride and Prejudice. I used the website suggested and this is my timeline (click on timeline).

I hope it's right! The dates I used were just ones I found on the internet or made up, as the website insisted upon dates for every point!

Monday 10 October 2011

'The Convent Threshold' by Christina Rossetti

In our last English Lit lesson we read through another Rossetti poem called 'The Convent Threshold'. I found the poem a lot more difficult to understand than some of the previous Rossetti pieces we've looked at. However I understood a few points made in the poem and will explain them the best I can.

The poem seems to be about a pair of lovers who have committed a 'crime', the most obvious thought is that they had sex outside marriage. The poem is told to us by a presumably female persona, and she seems to feel that they have sinned and so must repent. The sex outside marriage is insinuated through "all the gifts we took and gave" as the gifts they gave suggests they gave each other their love and virginity, however these were also the gifts they took as because they weren't married they shouldn't have taken these gifts from each other. So as I said the speaker seems very affected by what they did and she is trying pursuade her lover to repent in the poem. She seems to be very religious and feels they both must repent in order to go to heaven. The persona seems to feel tainted by their wrongdoing, this is shown in "My lily feet are soiled with mud, with scarlet mud"-this symbollises something pure and clean, like a lily being made dirty and stained. So this could show that the speaker's virginity and innocence have been spoiled. Also refering to the mud as "scarlet" suggests blood, so this ties in the idea of tradegy and extreme guilt on the speaker's part. So the speaker seems to want to make herself pure again, this is shown in "I seek the sea of glass and fire to wash the spot, to burn the snare"-she is seeking forgiveness, she wants to burn the symbollic snare that is holding her back (which could be her lover) so she can be free.

In the poem there is a lot of imagery about heaven and earth as the speaker seems to be torn between the two. Some examples of the imagery of heaven are "mansions where the righteous sup" and "far-off city grand"- as heaven is far off it could imply that the speaker is waiting for her lover to repent with her before making the journey to heaven. So the speaker obviously loves the man very much but is urging him to repent so they can be together forever in heaven, "Repent, repent, and be forgiven. This life is long but yet it ends" -if he repents their love can be eternal. However the man doesn't seem to be very interested in the idea of heaven, maybe he is not religious or feels they have done nothing wrong. A quote that shows this is "Your eyes look earthward, mine look up". This shows the seperation between the lovers and shows the speaker is in conflict; her religion or her love. This is also illustrated in the fact that earth is made to seem heavenly in the poem, perhaps showing earth is her heaven if her love is there. For example the people are described as having "golden hair" which suggests purity and happiness. The speaker feels very strongly about her religion and her wish that her lover will repent, however we see how much her love means to her. "How should I rest in Paradise, or sit on steps of heaven alone?" this shows even heaven cannot compare to their love, and that heaven would be more like hell were he not there with her.
So overall the speaker seems to be in conflict with herself in the poem; Heaven or earth? Religion or love? A quote that I think shows this is "only my lips still turn to you, my livid lips that cry, Repent!" The reference to lips shows her passion and love for the man, but the livid cry of "Repent!" shows her struggle and religious devotion.

The poem also shows parrallels with the story of Heloise and Abelard.

Wednesday 5 October 2011

'Cousin Kate'-essay plan with quotes

In our last lesson we started to plan an answer for the question; 'To what extent do you agree that the women in 'Cousin Kate' are heroic?'. These are some of the ideas we came up with:


To a certain extent the women in 'Cousin Kate' are heroic, for example;
  • The speaker overcomes her bad experience and rises above tradition, whilst also challenging it. She takes the critism and carries on, she rises above it. For example she is called an "outcast thing" by the neighbours, and she is very proud of her son at the end. She calls him her "shame" and "pride", thus showing that she considers him her pride and joy but society sees him as her shame. She refuses to act as a weak woman who just accepts the power of men in society. We see in the poem that women in general are second best to men, however in the poem the speaker challenges this and ends up better for it.
  • The female speaker is headstrong, she knows her morals and achknowledges that she did something wrong in being tricked into sleeping with the lord. Quotes that show this are "so now I moan an unclean thing" she considers herself dirty and she was obviously upset by what happened to her, but she uses her experience to make her stronger. When she says how she would not have been bought by the lord's land and she says she would "spit into his face"-this shows quite a feminist view and shows she has a strong feeling of what she thinks is right and wrong. This symbolises women standing up to men, and displays women's strength, therefore suggesting they're heroic.
  • The speaker prevails over men at the end as her son will inherit his lands, it's like victory has come to the women at last. This is shown in "Your father would give lands for one to wear his coronet".
  • Cousin Kate is on a moral high ground as she hasn't actually done anything wrong, however because we only see Kate through the speakers eyes it creates a speaker bias. For example she is called "good and pure by the neighbours which shows women's normal traits.
  • At the beginning of the poem we see women to be gentle, beautiful and kind, for example "cottage maiden" suggest innocence and "not mindful I was fair" shows women in general to be humble. So the women are gentle and kind, but they aren't weak.
However you can also argue that the women aren't at all heroic in the poem 'Cousin Kate'. For example;
  • The speaker seems to feel she is better than cousin Kate, when she says "neighbours call you good and pure" etc it's like she's saying Kate doesn't deserve this treatment, it shows the speaker's jealousy.
  • The speaker gets tricked by the lord into sleeping with him. This shows women's weakness , naïvity and lack of sensible judgement. Quotes that show this are "lured me to his palace home" and "His plaything"-the speaker has been controlled and taken advantage of by the man, so this shows women not to be heroic as men have control over them. The lord is also able to "choose" cousin Kate, it's as if there is no input from the women, they just do as they're told, therefore displaying a form of weakness.
  • The women seem very bitchy in the poem. For example in the poem the speaker is talking to her cousin Kate and she seems very bitter. She says "Because you were so good and pure" to Kate and it sounds like she is being sarcastic, even mocking Kate. She also ridicules Kate because she can't have children, which is awful as, as a woman the speaker should know how important it is for women to carry a child themselves. This is shown in "Yet I've a gift you have not got, and seem not like to get". This is like she's showing off, using her son to get back at Kate and therefore displaying no natural motherly instinct women are expected to have. So the speaker makes bitchy snide comments. Also Kate herself betrayed the speaker by agreeing to marry the speakers lover. We are told that Kate had a "stronger wing" than the speaker. So suggests she played the game better than the speaker as she doesn't actually have feelings for the lord. This is shown in "writ in sand" her love is temporary. This could even suggest that Kate is leading the lord on now as he may actually have feelings for her. (shows women to be just as bad as men).
  • Women aren't heroic as the patriarchal rule remains at the end. The women are fighting over a man the entire way through which displays men's power and women's pettiness.
  • Women display a love of material things. For example Kate seems to only marry the lord for his wealth, this is shown in "lifted you from mean estate", "bought me with his land" and "all your clothes and wedding-ring". Kate shows aspects of greed. The speaker, despite what she says, also displays a longing for material things at the end of the poem. For example "give lands for one to wear his coronet"-the speaker is using her son to rub it in Kate's face that her son will inherit all the lords land and Kate will be left with nothing.
Conclusion
Overall you could argue that women are heroic in the poem as we see the narrator go on a journey to eventually prevail over the man, she grows strong and is raising a child alone which, in itself displays heroism. She is a fallen women with a plan and hope for the future. However I think that women aren't heroic in the poem to a higher extent. For example even though the speaker prevails at the end it doesn't symbolise women prevailing over men, as Kate gets left behind. So I think the ending more shows that women are not unified and so cannot prevail over men until they get along with each other. Also the whole poem focuses on the betrayal of the speaker by cousin Kate, so this isn't very heroic. Finally the women appear bitchy, snide and jealous. For example the speaker seems jealous of Kate's beauty "You grew more fair than I".  
Rossetti may have intentionally made the speaker the victim and Kate the betrayer to show her views in feminism. For example that women can't expect equal treatment from men if they can't even respect each other.

Friday 30 September 2011

'Cousin Kate' by Christina Rossetti-Time and sequence

The time and sequence in the poem is quite deliberate in building sympathy for the speaker. If she had started the poem talking about how happy she is with her son then it would have been a lot more difficult to gain the readers sympathy. So the poem starts with the speaker looking back in restrospective at her life before she slept with the lord. The first stanza is filled with regret and wonder as to why it had to be her. This is shown in "why did the great lord find me out and praise my flaxen hair?"-it's as if she's asking a higher power why it had to be her. Why the lord had to pick her out. The fact that the man is just referred to as the lord could have a religious connotation. She could be asking why god chose her to be the one that succumbed to the man and then must bare all the guilt and consequence.

The speaker then shows how low she has sunk in the eyes of sociey etc by dwelling on what happened and how foolish she was. She also shows her bitterness towards cousin Kate. Her unhappiness and regret is shown in "now I moan an unclean thing, who might have been a dove"-She is now dirty in the eyes of everyone around her and she is filled with remorse and bitterness that she could have been this pure, virtuous woman had it not been for the lord.

However at the end of the poem the speaker drops in a twist, she reveals she has gained a son from her experiences and she seems to be sure that everything will be ok as she talks of her son inheriting the lord's lands. So we go on a journey with the speaker. We see he go from high to all time low to another, new different high. One that revolves around her son and the promises he holds for the future. Finally as we are told about her son at the end it's the last thing in our minds having read the poem. So the last message we get from the poem is that something good always comes out of a bad situation. In this case the speaker has become a stronger person and re-gained her pride in the form of her son.

Overall the sequence of the poem is ordered and simple so that there is no confusion. The time and sequence helps build on the morals and themes of the poem as well.

'Cousin Kate' by Christina Rossetti-Setting and a Tiny Bit About Destination

The setting is shown in many lines in the poem 'Cousin Kate'. For example the first line including "cottage maiden" suggests the countryside. As does the mention of "working  among the rye" and the word "lane". These are all things I would associate with rural areas as apposed to urban areas. "Cottage maiden" also is symbollic of vulnerability and low social status ans wealth. So this helps with the understanding of the poem. Also when the speaker mentions the "lord" I imagine a lord of the manor, with a big estate in the country. His land is also refered to later on. The fact that the poem is set in the country could also show why the speakers actions with the lord are considered so scandalous. The society in the country could be a lot more sheltered than that of the city. Plus the atmosphere is set with "hardened by sun and air"-it creates a very romantic feeling of the countryside, however what happens in the poem between the lord and the speaker isn't the least bit romantic.

The setting used in the poem may not be real, but may just be symbolic for creating atmosphere. Also for foreshadowing the destination of the poem in terms of the innocent maiden being taken advantage of by the powerful lord. However the destination of the poem is not as expected. The fallen woman metaphorically gets back on her feet at the end and prevails over the other characters. She doesn't wallow in self pity, she embraces her new life with her son and seems in control. This is not what I expected when I read the beginning or middle of the poem. So the twist at the end makes the destination unpredictable which, I think, adds to the poem as a whole.

Ooh look, I didn't write a lot!!!!

'Cousin Kate' by Christina Rossetti-Voice and Points of View

Voice
The voice throughout the poem is that of the narrator, the woman who has become an "outcast thing" in society due to her brief love affair with the lord without marriage. For the majority of the poem the narrator or speaker is talking to her cousin Kate, who could actually be her cousin or she could be representative of how women should be close (like family/cousins) yet they stab each other in the back often. She is reflecting on everything that has happened to her and adressing Kate directly-"O Lady Kate, my cousin Kate". In the poem the way the speaker talks to Kate it's like she's providing a voice for all these so-called 'fallen women who may have done nothing wrong. Rossetti could have done this intentially as she may have worked with such women, who are also single mothers at St Mary Magdalene's penitentiary in Highgate.
In the last few lines of the poem, the speaker stops talking to Kate and starts addressing her son. "Cling closer, closer yet: Your father would give lands for one to wear his coronet"-So maybe the speaker was just telling a story to her son about society and the injustice of it, but that they will benefit in the end.

Points of View
The main point of view we see in the poem is evidentily that of the speaker, however we also get hints of general society's view. We know that the speaker achknowledges she was tricked by the lord but still seems bitter as she feels she didn't do anything wrong. This is shown in "Shameless shameful life"-she feels she hasn't sinned, but society says she has. We see society's view when it says "The neighbours call you good and pure, call me an outcast thing"-society obviously values marriage very highly and thinks it important in order for a woman to remain "pure". Whereas through the speaker's point of view we see this is unfair, as the same rules don't apply to men.
Also when the speaker says "why did the great lord find me out?" and repeats this it's evident she feels it's the man's fault and that anyone in her situation would have been tricked just as she was. We also see that the speaker thinks it's wrong that Kate married the lord,  and she says she would have "spat in his face". She seems to think that Kate has done more wrong than her as her love for the lord was short-lived and she betrayed the speaker.
The speaker seems to find the most fault in the lord, she repeats over and over again how "he" did this and "he" did that. To perhaps illustrate that he was in the wrong. She was the object and he was the subject.

Finally it is the narrator's point of view that she is still strong at the end of the poem. She is a fallen woman with the means to metaphorically get back on her feet, for example she has a new joy in her son. She shows this by saying "I've a gift you have not got and seem not like to get"-the fact she refers to her son as a gift shows that, in her view she doesn't see her son as proof of her shame etc, she feels she has gained something wonderful by having him. She refers to him as her "shame" and "pride"-again it's like in the view of society he is her shame, whereas in her eye, he is simply her pride.

So overall we are pursuaded by the narrator to see her point of view, we aren't supposed to side with anyone else.

'Cousin Kate' by Christina Rossetti-Characters

Today we continued to look at the poem 'Cousin Kate' by Christina Rossetti. In this entry I'm going to look at the way Rossetti presents the characters in the poem.

The Speaker
The speaker in the poem is the one who has become an "outcast" in society due to her brief love affair with a lord she wasn't married to. The way the speaker talks about the events that unfold, it's obvious we are supposed to be on the speaker's side, rather than the lord's and cousin Kate's.
For example the description the speaker gives of herself at the beginning suggests to me she was innocent and very happy with her life before she made the mistake of mistaking sex for love with the lord. "cottage maiden" suggests to me virginity and innocence. Plus she obviously isn't from the city so she could be seen to be vulnerable-she is being set up as the victim already. Also we are told she was "contented with my cottage mates"- Rossetti/the speaker is illustrating how everything in the girl's life was good before, until the lord tricked her and messed it all up. We are also told that the speaker doesn't know she's beautiful, "not mindful I was fair". This suggests to me that she was virtuos, humble and pure.

Then when the speaker starts to tell us what happened we see that she was indeed the victim. She says that the lord "lured" her to his home. The word "lured" again suggests he is leading her, and she is merely following him, taken in by his influence and her own love for him. We see how he cruelly used her for sex and she bares the consequences of this because she is a woman and has no power. So again this links to feminism and the idea of 'fallen women'. The speaker achknowledges that she was merely his "plaything" and he has made her an "unclean thing" in the eyes of society. There is also an injustice in that she actually loved the lord, "my love was true".

So we are already sympathising with the speaker. Then she introduces cousin Kate, the woman who the lord left her for. In a way cousin Kate was in the exact same position as the speaker, the only difference is the lord "bound" her with his ring. The use of the word "bound" also suggests he trapped her in a way simular to the speaker. So all this makes us feel sorry for the speaker as we see she is the same as Kate, yet Kate is called "good and pure" because she is married, and the speaker is called "an outcast thing" as she isn't-thing, not person. We also side with the speaker as she acknowledges she was naive to have been tricked by him, this is shown where she says "fooled".

Finally we prefer the speaker to any of the other characters as she is shown to have good morals. She ensures cousin Kate that were their places reversed, the lord "would not have won her with his love" or "bought her with his land". So the speaker is presented as good as she would have stuck to her morals and not given in to the lord for want of fortune.

The lord
The lord is made out to be a very seedy, horrible man. He "lures" the speaker into sleeping with him out of wedlock and then he goes in living his life without regret or prejudice against him.  We are told he "changed me (the speaker) like a glove"-after he used her for sex he easily discarded her. We are also told he "sits up high"-so we can infer he's very rich and high up in the social hierarchy. This also makes him sound almost godlike, perhaps to show man's power over women. The lord also seems arrogant as he "chose you (Kate0 and cast me by (speaker)"- he feels he can just pick and choose women when he feels like it. So we see the lord isn't a nice man at all.

Cousin Kate
Cousin Kate is made out by the speaker to be very weak for agreeing to marry the lord, despite the fact she presumably knew about what he did to the speaker. The speaker says "He lifted to from mean estate"-So the lord took Kate from rags to riches, and this may have been why she married him. We are also told Kate "sits in gold and sings"- she is enjoying the good life and having a "pure" reputation. The speaker also says that Kate's "love was writ in sand"- this shows how Kate never really loved the lord like the speaker did, her love for him was very imperminant like writing in sand. We also dislike Kate because she is respected by everyone in society just because she's married. She seems to have got away very lightly compared to the speaker.
We also see from the speakers description of Kate that she seems to have only married the lord for want of material things, like land and "clothes and wedding ring". So she is living this false life of virtuosness and happiness, whilst the speaker is looked down upon and considered a fallen woman living a "shameful life".

Ooh look I wrote a lot.

Tuesday 27 September 2011

Fallen Women-Cousin Kate by Christina Rossetti

In todays lesson we looked at the idea of a 'fallen woman' and what this might invlove. We also read Rossetti's poem 'Cousin Kate' and linked the 'fallen woman' idea into the poem.

When we tried to define a fallen woman we came up with many ideas. One that stood out was this concept of a woman who's been entised into sex by a man, and therefore lost her innocence and the respect of society. We realised that if women sleep around they are called a whore, slag, tart etc, the names are endless and they lose respect, whereas if a man sleeps around it is, and always has been considered more acceptable and can even be seen to raise the man's status. He may be called a 'man whore' but this is still using the female term of 'whore' and is therefore refering to women. So it was excepted that if a woman had sex before marriage she is dirty and disgraced, whereas a man in the same situation would be thought nothing of. This point is illustrated a poem called 'The Deceived Girl' which we briefly read through. In this poem a woman is tricked into sleeping with a man who uses her. It's the usual story expected when you hear of a 'fallen woman'.
One person (India) also suggested it could be a metaphor for an angel falling from heaven.

We then read 'Cousin Kate' by Rossetti, which is about a woman who slept with this lord out of wedlock whom she loved, however he then left her and married her cousin Kate, leaving her an outcast, looked down upon in society. So the speaker in the poem is the perfect example of the 'fallen woman', however she then flips the stereotype around and rather than just accepting the injustice of her situation she concentrates on what she has gained from her experience. We see towards the end of the poem that the speaker was made pregnant by her brief love affair and she shows how proud she is of her son. For example she says "I've a gift you have not". So there's this idea that all though she lost alot, her acceptance in society and innocence, there's always something to be gained. So she breaks the stereotype by not being bitter at the end of the poem, but by having a plan, displaying strength and control over her own life. Plus she almost rubs it in cousin Kate's face that she has an heir to the lord's land etc as it seems Kate cannot have children.

So that's what we came up with about 'fallen women'. However, there is always the possibility that a fallen woman is just a woman that has fallen on the floor. I find this very unlikely though! =D
I look forward to analysing the poem more next lesson sir!!

Saturday 24 September 2011

'Goblin Market' Interpretations- Feminism, Marxism, Moral and Redemption

In our last English Lit lesson we looked in more detail at the other 4 interpretations that I mentioned in my previous blog entry. I will write a little bit about them each now, obviously I won't be talking about erotic as I gave a detailed blog entry about that previously.

Feminism
'Goblin Market' contains many aspects of feminism. For example the only representation of men in the poem are the goblins. This suggests that this was how Rossetti wanted us to see men in general. The goblins are animalistic in appearance and when they speak they hiss etc. So men are portrayed as evil, ugly creatures that "leer" at women and force themselves on them. Plus they seem quite seedy, a quote that illustrates this is "Pretty Goblin' still for 'Pretty Polly". The goblins are in a way patronising Laura.
In contrast, Laura and Lizzie are the only women in the poem, so we can assume they are symbollic of how Rossetti sees all women. In the poem women are all virtuous and good, but the goblin men ruin their relationships and steal their innocence. The women themselves have pure relationships with each other. For example Laura and Lizzie's relationship is so intimate it goes beyond sisterhood. This is shown in "cheek to cheek and breast to breast"-This is not necasserily erotic, it simply shows the pure relationships of women in comparison to men.

Finally in the poem women prevail over men as Lizzie is the heroine and she effectively defeats the goblins. So again Rossetti is showing women to be good and stong in a different way to men. For example even when it mentions that Laura and Lizzie marry at the end, there is still no reference to men. Instead it says "For there is no friend like a sister" to emphasise women's importance.

Marxism
Another way in which 'Goblin Market' could be interpreted is through Marxism. I found Marxism interesting as I had never heard of it before, and apparently it refers to money, trade and, in particular, consumerism.
I must admit I think that Marxism is the least important interpretation. However there are a few key points to be made. For example you could argue that in the poem there's this idea that consumerism is bad, and that we are never satisfied with what we have. An example of this in the poem is that once Laura has had a taste of the fruit she immediately wants more. This is shown in Laura in an absent dream...longing for the night". Laura is just wasting away waiting for the night to come so she can hear the goblins cry yet again. This could also link to Rosseti's religious views as Laura seems to show greed or gluttony which is one of the seven deadly sins.
Finally the goblins could represent business men, who trick people into buying their products. For example when it says "brother to sly brother" it's as if the goblins have spotted a vulnerable customer which they know they can pursuade to buy their produce.
However, like I said I consider Marxism to be the weakest of the five interpretations, for example in the poem the goblin refuse to take Lizzie's penny towards the end, yet money is the centre of business.

Moral
Morality is, I think, one of the if not the most important interpretations of 'Goblin Market'. This is because it ties in with the other interpretations so much. For example in the poem Rossetti gives us moral messages about Marxism, feminism, redemption and erotica/sex.
Rossetti's moral views are heavily influenced by her religion, and this is reflected in 'Goblin Market'. For example there is the allusion to the Biblical story of Adam and Eve, as the fruit is mentioned it links to the garden of eden. So the fruit represents temptation and the goblins could represent Satan. We are warned (ironically by Laura) right of the beginning of the poem against the dangers of the fruit and goblin men; "We must not look at goblin men, we must not buy their fruits". So Rossetti could be saying that temptation is wrong is all ways, in regards to sex and greed.

In the poem Laura's actions represent the wrong thing to do. For example she gives in to temptation and sell herself in a way, to buy the fruit (links to prostitution). This has severe consequences as she ages prematurely and seems to become depressed in her longing for the fruit. This is shown in "Her hair grew thin and grey; She dwindled". She has lost herself along the way. We also see how the consequences of your own bad or 'sinful' actions can hurt other people, for instance Lizzie is "trod and hustled" and physically abused by the goblins whilst trying to save Laura.
Lizzie's actions in the poem show good and kindness. She self-lessly gives herself to the goblins for attack, and she still manages not to give in to temptation. This is shown in "she would not open lip from lip"-She refuses to succumb to the goblins.

So overall I think that 'Goblin Market' has many moral messages lying beneath the surface, and I have briefly touched on some of the key ones here. In my previous blog entry about erotic interpretations of the poem I talked about some of the sexual morals I believe Rossetti may have been trying to put across.

Redemption
Redemption is quite an important interpretation of 'Goblin Market'. There is the idea of forgiveness in the poem as soon as Laura succumbs to the goblins. At first Laura wants to be forgiven for eating the fruits and for leaving her sister alone whilst she gave in to her desires. However due to how affected Laura is by the fruit, she cannot redeem herself. So Lizzie, as her sister takes on this role. Lizzie's suffering at the hands of the goblins in order to save her sister/redeem her sins, shows parallels with the Christian redemptive story of Jesus on the cross. So in the story Lizzie's abuse would be reflective of Jesus' crucifiction, in which he dies so the human race can be forgiven for it's sins. For example Lizzie's body is broken (like Christ) so that Laura's sins can be forgiven. Lizzie's abuse is shown in "Twitched her hair out by the roots, stamped upon her tender feet"-She is clearly suffering.
Then, when Lizzie has saved Laura there is the idea of restoration, which, depending on how you interpret the poem can mean different things. For example it could be Laura being redeemed for her sins or it could symbollise her virginity being restored etc.

Finally at the end of the poem we see how grateful Laura is to her sister for saving her, "would tell them how her sister stood in deadly peril to do her good"-So Laura is almost trying to further redeem herself for what happened to Lizzie because of what she did. She does this by showing her gratitude and teaching her children how brave her sister was.
So overall I think redemption is quite a strong interpretation that again links to morals.

Overall, I think the two most important or strong interpretations of 'Goblin Market' by Christina Rossetti are moral and erotic, with redemption and feminism close behind, and Marxism at the bottom as I believe it's the weakest point for interpretation.

Thursday 22 September 2011

The 'Goblin Market' Interpretations-Erotic

In our last English Lit lesson we were concentrating on different interpretations of 'Goblin Market' by Christina Rossetti. There we five main categories of how you could interpret the peom, these are:
  • Erotic
  • Feminist
  • Marxist
  • Redemptive
  • Moral
The category my group was given was eroctic. So I will be concentrating on how you could say 'Goblin Market' is purely about sex etc.

You could argue the whole poem is about sexual frustration, temptation and release. Perhaps that Rossetti, being a devout Anglo-Catholic, portrays sex as a sinful act that should not be given in to. Some critics have even suggested that 'Goblin Market' has aspects of repressed sexuality and therefore hints at homosexuality. However I am not so sure of this, purely because of who wrote the poem and when.

The poem contains many innuendos and sexual imagery from the start. For example all the fruits the goblins sell could represent parts of the body, such as "plump unpecked cherries" The description of unplucked cherries also suggests virginity. The two girls in the poem are made out to seem very innocent and sweet, however then one of them gives in to the goblins and her innocence is lost and destroyed. So Rossetti could have been giving a religious message about sex. That you shouldn't give in to temptation otherwise you will be punished for being sinful. Or she could have been illustrating how young girls rush into sex and are very vulnerable to it, thus showing how much damage and pain this can bring. For example when Lizzie tries to buy the fruit for her sister she appears to be sexually as well as physically abused by the goblins. So she is making sex seem very dangerous and negative-especially in the long run. These views could have been influenced by the things Rossetti saw and experienced whilst volunteering with helping prostitutes and single-mothers.

So the girls, Laura and Lizzie, are made to seem very innocent at the beginning of the poem. For example they are described as "maids". However when Laura hears the tempting goblin call of "come buy" it's as if in her mind she is fighting herself not to give in, but she quite quickly does. This is shown when it says "last restraint is gone"-it's as of her desire has overcome her. Laura then shows her vulnerabilty by cutting a lock of golden hair and giving it to the goblins as payment. This could be symbollic of the belt of chastity being cut. Also with the line "she never tasted such before" we see Laura's sexual tension being released. This could have an underlying message from Rossetti, that sex is enjoyable; however she feels that girls become addicted and can't stop once they give in - again this shows links with prostitution.

This picture shows Laura giving her golden hair to the goblins.
There are many phrases used in 'Goblin Market' that seem/sound very erotic and, in parts, very graphic. These include "sucking fruit globes", "sweeter than honey from the rock" and finally "she sucked and sucked and sucked the more, fruits which that unknown orchard bore; she sucked until her lips were sore". All of these quotes could be interpreted to represent sexual acts or just sex itself ( I won't go into detail!!). These quotes also make sex sound rough, the picture formed in your head when you interpret these terms in a sexual way isn't pleasant. They make sex sound quite vulger.

Then later on when Lizzie enters the goblin clearing she seems to be sexually abused by the goblins. They could represent dirty, seedy men who "leer" at girls and entise them (again Rossetti could have drawn from stories she'd heard from the prostitutes she helped rehabilitate at St Mary Magdalene's penitentiary). Lizzie's sexual abuse is shown in "held her hands and squeezed their fruits against her mouth to make her eat"- It could be interpreted to be symbollic of the fact the goblins are forcing themselves on her.
Despite their supposed abuse, Lizzie doesn't surrender to sexual temptation. She keeps in mind what she is there for (her sisters well-being) and she refuses to succumb to the tempting offer the goblins make. This is metaphorically shown in "would not open lip from lip"- she won't say a word and will also not let them invade her body (she is a closed book in every crude way). Even though Lizzie has the same wants and desires as her sister, she puts her faith in her sister first. This could mirror how Rossetti feels- she would put her divine love of God before fulfilling her earthly sexual desires.

So overall I think 'Goblin Market' can be interpreted to be completely erotic, as many lines in the poem are impossible to read without sexual implacations springing to mind (unless you're a child). However I think even if the poem is entirely focused on sex, it's not just pure erotica. I think Rossetti has linked in a moral message about sex that may be linked to her strong religious views. This view is that it is not sinful to have sexual feelings and desires, but it is sinful to act upon them. Therefore explaining why Laura is effectively destroyed by her eating of the fruit or symbolically giving up her virginity and innocence voluntarily. She, along with her sister, pay a high price for her brief moment of bliss and satisfaction.
The poem could also be showing how Rossetti felt with regards to her sexuality etc.

Hope this is right!!!!!

Saturday 17 September 2011

Christina Rossetti

Christina Rossetti was an English poet that lived in the 19th Century. She wrote many different things, including childrens nursery rhymes and other poetry with more adult symbolism. A lot of her poetry, especially the poems for children centre around nature and have religious aspects. This is because Christina herself was a devout Christian so her poetry was often influenced by her religious views. For example one of her most famous poems called 'Goblin Market' shows similarities with the Biblical story of Adam and Eve. Although the poem was said to be a mere fairy tale for children at the time, it seems to have more adult themes throughout and contains hints of sexual imagery. Some call it a tale of repressed sexuality and sisterhood. However Rossetti never preached,  but showed her views on the tensions between earthly passions and divine love of God.
 Other poems of hers are centred around romance and are quite morbid. Christina herself was engaged but never married, on religous grounds. In some of her work she shows intense feelings about love and relationships.

Rossetti is also considered to be one of the great female poets of the Victorian era because of the way her poems portray women. She was a big believer in feminism and believed that women should have equal rights etc. She volunteered for ten years at St Mary Magdalene's penitentiary for prostitutes and unmarried mothers in Highgate.

In the later years of her life Rossetti got Graves disease and it took it's toll on her life. Some of her last poems contain the reacurring theme of the loss of beauty.
She died in 1894.

English Lit-Goblin Market by Christina Rossetti

One of the poets we are studying is Christina Rossetti. The first text we are looking at of hers is 'Goblin Market'. Having never heard of her poetry before I was intrigued by the way she writes. The poem (or short story as I believe it should be called as it is eleven pages long!!!!) was very dark and told a clear story throughout, with a beginning, a middle and an end. Now I must admit poetry is not my favourite aspect of literature and I often find it hard to follow, however with 'Gobin Market' I found myself thoroughly intrigued and, whether it's because it's so long or it's just written brilliantly, I understood it well.

The poem has quite a gothic air to it and the story told is simular to that of the Biblical story of Adam and Eve and the forbidden fruit (except with goblins). For example the poem involves goblins that move around a woods selling all the fresh fruits you can imagine, two girls come across the goblins and one is tempted into buying the fruit and it effectively destroys her and causes her previous innocence to wilt as a result of her having consumed the forbidden fruit, and this again links to the idea of temptation being her downfall. I won't spoil the rest!

In the beginning of the poem everything seems quite innocent and magical. As I read it I imagined an enchanted forest with these sweet and ripe fruits being sold by the goblins. Everything has such an innocence at the start of the poem, however as the poem progresses and the two sisters, Laura and Lizzie are introduced, the goblins seem too mysterious and fear of the unknown starts to take hold. Then when Laura cannot resist the goblins call of "Come buy, come buy" the goblins are described as these grotesque animalistic characters, which flips the poem from magical, to sinister and frightening. Laura's vulnerability is exposed and the golbins seem to relish it, and then her innocence is gone and her addiction to the fruit takes hold of her. Again there is reference to Christianity as when Laura is eating the fruit Rossetti describes it so she seems greedy, "She sucked and sucked and sucked the more Fruits which that unknown orchard bore; She sucked until her lips were sore" This links to gluttony which is one of the so-called seven deadly sins.
We haven't gone through the whole poem in depth yet (should only take a couple of years =D) so that's all I can shed real light on at the moment.

However I do think the poem is written brilliantly, Rossetti was able to maintain the steady rhythm throughout the poem which makes you really get involved with the poem as it progesses. Plus the language used by Rossetti is fantastic and you find yourself totally pulled in by the words. For example the fact that the rhyming couplets continue throughout is enough to amaze me, but like I said I'm not the biggest poem buff ever!

I look forward to analysing more of the poem next lesson Mr F!

Tuesday 13 September 2011

English Literature Lesson Number 2

Today I had my second offiicial English Lit lesson with Mr F. I'm really enjoying them so far and I find what we're studying particuarly interesting!

I have never really thought about how the narrator creates the story before, and the realisation that everything in a story has been carefully thought out and used for a reason really draws me in and makes me excited to study more! (never thought I'd say that!!). Although to most it may seem obvious, I'd never thought of it and just skimmed through a lot of the narrative parts in books to get to the more "exciting" parts. Whereas now I realise I may have skipped crucial hints at the way the story is going.

For example, we are studying the classic 'Pride and Prejudice' by Jane Austen. Although I enjoyed the book the first time I read it, it took me a while to really get into it. It proboably didn't help that I was rushing it as I was on holiday. However I am currently reading through it again at what I would call a leisurely pace! Already I find myself understanding it more and the language used seems less alien than before!

There are many examples of different aspects of narrative in even the first chapter of 'Pride and Prejudice'. One that we looked at today was the way the destination of the story is presented. From the very first famous paragraph of "It is a truth universally achknowledged, that a single man in possession of  a good fortune, must be in want of a wife." we already have been presented with an idea or theory which foreshadows the way in which the book will progress, and the destination in which the book is heading. It's the idea of marriage and fortune and about how they link together more than most would expect. Not only are these famous words the first in the book, they are in a paragraph of their own, perhaps to signify their importance and tell you as the reader that they present an idea crucial throughout the novel.

Also the way in which Austen barely uses description during the first chapter keeps you focused on the conversation the Bennets are having rather than thinking about them as people. This shows the conversation to be of high significance as Austen wants you to concentrate purely on what is being said by the characters, rather than the characters themselves. The conversation they are having foreshadows the novel's destination as it mirrors the ideas put forward in the first paragraph.
 Although Austen dedicates a small paragraph at the end of the chapter to desciptions, the last line of the chapter again refers to this idea of marriage and wealth. "The business of her life was to get her daughters married; its solace was visiting and news." So this leaves the reader with this idea fresh in their mind: that marriage is key theme throughout the book and that the novel will surely revolve around the events and difficulties faced by Mrs Bennet as she attempts to assure her daughters are married well to someone of a comfortable salary, and that one of them will surely be married to Mr Bingley since he is the centre of Mrs Bennet's attentions in the first chapter.

Hope this is somewhat right Mr F!! I'm not sure if I brought my ideas across that well, but I know what I'm getting at even if no one else does!
Really enjoying English Lit so far though! Thanks for the good start!

Tuesday 6 September 2011

"Mr Francis entered the room. There was a piece of paper on the floor"

Why is the inclusion of the detail of the paper on the floor important?

The inclusion of the detail of the paper on the floor is important as it was purposely written into the story by the narrator. Therefore it must mean something and be of some significance to the plot otherwise the writer wouldn't have included it, the paper isn't on the floor by accident, the author has intentially placed it there for whatever reason.

The paper on the floor could be used to set the scene, for example it could help illustrate that the room is messy and untidy. It could also be representative of the fact that the character or "Mr Francis" is not in control of the situation as he can't keep his room tidy, or it could suggest that his students are unruly and he can't control them.
It could also be used to describe his character, for example he is messy and leaves things lying around, or it could be a sign about the character's life. Perhaps things are never where he wants them and this could symbolise that he is never where he wants to be in life. Also the fact that the paper on the floor is the first thing "Mr Francis" notices, or the first thing the reader is told about the room, could represent the fact that the character always looks for the worst in things. So it could tell us that he has a negative personality.

The paper could also be significant in creating a certain atmosphere. The paper on the floor could be a sign to the reader that things are not as they seem, for example someone has been into the room and moved things around, perhaps searching through things they shouldn't have been. So the description of the paper being out of place on the floor could be used to aid the narrator in creating suspense or tension in the story. The paper being on the floor could also trigger a reaction in the character that is important to the plot, for example "Mr Francis" could become very angry about the paper as it could be the last straw in a terrible day he's had, etc etc.

What is on the paper itself could also be important for the plot to progress. The fact that the paper is on the floor could be to grab the characters attention so they look at it immediately rather than just tossing it aside. The paper could contain infomation vital for the plot to move on, for example an important letter or a note from another key character, it could be a list, a bank statement, a document, anything.

Finally the paper could be symbolic of something, and may reflect an important or reaccuring theme within the story. For example if the paper was scrunched up it could be symbollic of how the character is feeling at the time. He could be feeling defeated, his confidence knocked so he wants nothing more than to just lie on the floor by the paper and collapse. Or it could mean that the character is feeling defensive and scared so he has metaphorically scrunched himself into a ball, just like the paper, to hide his feelings or emotions.

Overall the inclusion of the detail of the paper on the floor is important as it must be key in one way or another to the plot as the narrator has included it. The narrator isn't describing a real scene in which things are there for no reason, the narrator has created this scene and therfore the paper on the floor must be there for a reason, regardless of how important this reason is.

Hope this is along the right lines sir! I rambled on a little bit but that's what I've been doing all my life and it seems to have worked so far!